Students are becoming more and more reliant on the internet. While the internet is convenient, it has many negative effects, and it has many educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays, the
use
of
internet
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is increasing on a large scale globally. To do some research and getting up to date
information
,
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the student
a student
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student
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students
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must
use
internet
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the internet
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for daily
purpose
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purposes
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.
Internet
should be restricted after some level of work or project so that
people
can
use
their brain as well. Some
group
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of
people
saying that students are becoming dependent on the
internet
.
Internet
is useful
for
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not only for students but
also
for all generations during their routine.
Firstly
,
internet
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is widely using for personal financial planning, office work and meeting presentations, research purpose, maintaining social relations and
for
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getting updated
information
.
Student
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must learn the
internet
at
their
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right age and understand
proper
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value of using it to get
their
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better future.
People
can get business
information
, directions to reach any unknown place and many more things. The other group of
people
believing that
internet
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has negative effects like
people
are using
this
source to complete their own homework with the copy those content and
this
is
illegal
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an illegal
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way to do. They are not learning anything or doing any kind of analysing before getting
information
into their books.
In addition
, students are spending more time
to play
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games with the
use
of
internet
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and
that is
big
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a big
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distraction for their academic career. So,
this
addiction is not good for
the
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future life. In conclusion,
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the student
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student
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should
use
the
internet
for all necessary educational purposes only.
However
, it
also
has
negative
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a negative
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impact to harm themselves in various ways.
Internet
will be a good helping tool for
humas
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humans
human
but not a good dependency for everyone.
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  • critical thinking
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  • information overload
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