Nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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The plural verb are does not appear to agree with the singular subject young adult. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
The spelling of behaviors is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
To have doesn’t seem to work here.
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It seems that responsibilities may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It appears that the conjunction because is the wrong word choice after reason is. Consider changing it to that or rewriting the sentence.
The indefinite article, a, may be redundant when used with the uncountable noun life in your sentence. Consider removing it.
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Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- to illustrate
- take, for example