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it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sports or music and others not.Discuss both view and your opinion

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There’s a school of thought that, humans are born with the extraordinary
skills
 to become musicians or sportspersons in future.
On the contrary
, some say that with good coaching and encourage any human being can be made into a sports hero or a musician.
Thus
, my essay expresses these both views and
also
 my opinions below.
Firstly
, the babies born to the world carrying the DNA mainly from their
parents
 and some with their ancestors.
Therefore
, it is vital to note that, these unborn children were absorbed most of the talents and
skills
 of their
parents
 and express them when they were younger with the
skills
 of singing or playing instruments and
also
 winning as athletes. As
a
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star
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 in
martiart
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martial
matriarch
 and
daughter
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 of Mozzzart get his
experince
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experience
for
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 music from his
parents
 can be
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.
Hence
,
this
 expresses that, people can rise to a higher level in some areas only with
skills
 of their
parents
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 genes.
However
, some argue that most of the heroes who reached higher level are the best humans that spend most of their time developing
skills
 and talents. To be more precise, a musician like "Beethoven", an athlete like "Usain Bolt" is not gifted people that born with the
skills
 of talents their
parents
. They reached their target only with the hard work training and spent their entire lives developing their
skills
. Thereby, the generation who need to gain some
skills
 in sports or music must spend some of their time to develop those
skills
 with their instructors. Owing to these factors, I believe as human beings we must give our full strength and encourage to the
skills
 that we need to gain in our life rather than other opinions like relying on our genes that come up with our
parents
.
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