Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There has been much discussion revolving around the fact, that the number of abortions has been rising recently. Some people assert, that termination of
pregenancy
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pregnancy
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forbidden completely, whereas others argue, that
this
act should be legal
in particular
cases. In the following essay, I would like to discuss both points of view. Personally, I am
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of the latter view. There is no denying that abortion should always remain
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the
last
option and should not be considered as another type of birth control. Many people believe that an interruption is in fact a murder. These people argue, that even at the earliest stages of pregnancy the fetus looks like a human being and no one can be certain, that
this
unborn baby cannot feel pain during the termination of pregnancy. To put it
in other words
, no line was written between the stage of
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of cells and a living creature with basic human rights.
However
, all women should be allowed to decide what to do with their bodies and sometimes an uneasy way leads to the
decission
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decision
of
intrruption
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interruption
. Some women,
for example
, get pregnant at an early age and are aware of the fact, that bringing a child into
this
world would be irresponsible. Another reason for ending pregnancy might be the issue, that the baby is going to be born with serious health problems.
For instance
, one of my friends found out, that her baby would die only
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hours after birth, which would have been extremely difficult for the whole family, so she had decided to undergo a termination. In light of
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factors, I believe, that abortion should be legal. For my part, after considering the arguments above, I feel that an interruption is a difficult
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decision
to make, but I tend to believe, that
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some occasions it should be legal and that abortion is not something, women should
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for.
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