Some people believe that young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. Agree or Disagree?

Nowadays, juvenile crimes are increasing globally. To reduce

this

behavior

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, few suggest

to punish

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punishing

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them

as

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like adults. But I strongly disagree with

this

point because, I always believe that,

children

need correction of mistakes rather than punishment.

This

essay will examine the topic in detail.

To begin

with,

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punishments can initiate the

children

to be rebellion against society. To elaborate, before punishing the

children

make them

to

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understand the seriousness of the crime they committed.

Moreover

, the

children

should be accepted by the family as well as the society after

completion

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the completion

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of the punishment period. To exemplify,

many

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research evidence proved that,

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children

are more impulsive to commit

further

crimes after punishment because of anger.

In addition

,

these kind

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this kind

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of people become a big threat to the nation in future. To continue with, teaching the moral values at home can assist the

child

to grow as a socially accepted human being. For

this

, the parents should spend quality time with their

children

during

their

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each

stages

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of development. Because, it is proven that, peer pressure

are

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the major reason for the

students

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misbehavior

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. Apart from

this

, immediate correction of even

a small mistakes

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a small mistake

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of the

child

can make a big difference in their character. To exemplify, it is vital to be direct the

child

to the right path during

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each period of their growth. To sum up, the family members bring_up the

child

with positive thoughts,

moreover

, the

child

can be productive, if the

child

realizes his tiny mistakes from childhood. So, I disagree with the point of punishing the youngsters in an unacceptable way like a

matured

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person.