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Nowadays, families are not as close as in past and a lot of people have become used to this. Why is this happening? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

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It goes without saying that now as compare to past
families
 are not so close.It is due to their business.
This
 essay would explore the reasons why
this
 is happening. Commencing with the silent point of why
families
 are not closer now.It is due to their business or jobs.While
,
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 Individuals have jobs in which they work for longer hours.So they don't spend
time
 with their
families
.Some live very far from their family due to their jobs.In several
families
 both parents are working so,they don't meet with their
families
 for a long
time
.
For instance
, in ,lockdown all have a longer
time
 to spend with their
families
. It is argued that
this
 has benefits
also
 in society.If people are not so close
then
 they have sufficient
time
 to focus on their own life.They have more
time
 to develop their bright future.But due to
this
, Individuals live alone without their
families
.It leads to many mental health problems
such
 as depression,stress etc. In conclusion,
this
 all is due to the busy life, technology, electronic gadgets, development,moral values. So
families
 are going far away from their
families
.
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