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International tourism is becoming the world’s biggest industry. Unfortunately, it often creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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The chart illustrates, details about the five European
countries
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 expenditure percentage for several basic needs in the year 2002. Overall, the vast majority of the expenses are allocated to Food, drinks and alcohol in all the five
countries
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 while other consumers need to keep below 10% from the overall. In fact, a lower proportion of the spending pattern seems for all the five
countries
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 are about Leisure and education activities that keep below 5% of the total.
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, The consumption of food, beverage and tobacco are seemed nearly constant between Ireland (28.91%) and Tukey (32.14%) while Comparing to the same level of other three counties of Italy (16.36%) , Spain (18.80%) and Sweden (15.77%)
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, spending for the studies and leisure activities seem gradually plummet comparing to the other consumptions in all the
countries
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. To be more precise, the educational and outdoor activities expenditures of all 5
countries
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 keep constant between 1.98% and 4.35% while all other
countries
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 spend their money for the other needs.
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