Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree? what other measures do you think might be effective?

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recent decades the

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of

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has remarkably increased. In light of

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growth in

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, streets have become more crowded and the environment more polluted. To solve these issues, some

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think that charging extra for

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might help. In my view, increasing

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is a positive step but

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is employing alternatives like driving electric

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and car-pooling. Increasing the charges for

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can itself improve

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and environmental conditions.

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is simply because, with higher fares, there are far more reasons to save money by driving less and using

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only for important or far trips. In Sweden

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,

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is very expensive, so

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tend to

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bicycles

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to save money.

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has placed Sweden in the top 10 clean and

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pollution free

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countries. If

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is cheap and constantly within reach, our planet's future will keep being in danger and our communities will grow even more crowded.

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an increase in

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will not only refrain

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from using more

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but

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will help our environment stay clean.

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to elevating

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prices

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, other approaches

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as electric

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and car-pooling can be a golden solution. Using

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that function with electricity will spare the toxic gases like carbon monoxide,

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the severe

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, they have started driving Elon Mask's Tesla electric vehicles and in some states like Illinois,

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has greatly fallen. If it wasn't for that invention, humanity's rate of

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would have been much greater. Alongside electric

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, car-pooling can

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be an effective measure to reduce

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and

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jams by almost

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half. Car-pooling is when a group of

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have similar destinations so they share one car and its

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fare

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of each one of them driving his own.

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measure encourages

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as it's

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and more comfortable. In Egypt

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, for the sake of the streets and environment, a mobile application called "ride together" has been recently launched to incentivise

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to drive

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by sharing theirs.

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and

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jams can, not only harm us

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the short term by decreasing our quality of life

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but

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the long term by leaving our planet unfit for future generations.

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is why a combined effort in reducing

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by using less

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through sharing

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and driving electrical ones, will surely be effective. In conclusion,

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cars

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are very important nowadays, I strongly agree that their

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should be limited. With higher

petrol

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prices

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,

people

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will be encouraged to drive non-

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non-polluting

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and share rides, which will altogether lead to a decline in

traffic

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and

pollution

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.