While some individuals are of the opinion that whenever
people
face a bad
situation
, they should accept that, in others view, it is better to put our effort into improving the
situation
. From my perspective in some situations
such
as shortage of
money
people
should try to make a
situation
better, but in some other ,situations they should accept that.
From a psychological perspective, by accepting a bad
situation
, there is a possibility that individuals would have a happier life.
For instance
, when
people
are dissatisfied with their jobs, they would feel tedious at their workplace. As
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, a result they would not be able to do their tasks well.
However
, by accepting a bad
situation
such
as an unsatisfactory job, we would be able to focus on our duties. In
this
way, it is possible that we would get a raise or get a promotion. Some argue that in terms of shortage of
money
, accepting a bad
situation
lets us enjoy better from factors that are not related to
money
such
as spending quality of time with our family and walking in nature.
However
, from my perspective,
people
need
money
to meet their basic needs
such
as food and house. In
this
aspect, individuals need enough
money
to survive. They should work a lot to earn
money
and change the
situation
.
Moreover
, trying to improve a
situation
has advantages. As far as behavioural issues are concerned, by transforming a bad
situation
into a good
situation
, our self-confidence confidence would increase. But in some cases, we do not have any chance to change a
situation
.
For instance
, in developing
countries
with law infrastructure,
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generally there is a high unemployment rate.
People
should accept dissatisfactory jobs because there are no other job opportunities in their
countries
.
In conclusion, I believe that in some cases
such
as shortage of
money
people
should try to change a bad
situation
. In some other situations
such
as having a dissatisfying job, if we live in influent
countries
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countries
, we should accept a
situation
and if we live in a developed country, it is better to try to improve the
situation
.