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The crime rate in urban areas is usually much higher than in rural areas. Why is this? What can be done to address the problem of crime?

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In recent times, it has been evidently witnessed that
their
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 is
surge
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a surge
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 in the crime rate in
cities
,
in contrast
 to countryside areas. There are several reasons for
this
 and to ameliorate the issue certain steps can be taken in
this
 direction which will be explicated in
this
 essay. The
first
 and foremost reason for
surge
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 in the criminal activities is
soaring
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population
.
In other words
, with the rise in
number
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a number
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 of people in
cities
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,cities
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 there will be
hike
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a hike
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 in the unemployment rate which cannot be seen in
case
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 of underdeveloped places. Indeed, individuals of developed regions have a desire to live an opulent lifestyle, but due to work constrain they opt
illicit
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for illicit
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 ways to earn money
such
 as theft, burglaries, murder and many more to mention. Whereas residents of rural regions believe in sober living.
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,
a
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data obtained from police headquarter reveals that 78%
crimes
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of crimes
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 are
comitted
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committed
 by youngsters to full fil luxurious desires of their
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live
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 in partner.
Thus
, a
keen
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 to live
luxurious
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 lifestyle
as well as
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, as well as lack of job opportunities,
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lack
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 of job opportunities add fuel to the fire. To curb the issue, there should be
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implementation of stringent laws so that it would create fear in
mind
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the mind
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 of
person
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the person
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 prior to commencement of any sort of
henious
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heinous
 crime.
Moreover
, there should be a restraint on
population
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the population
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 of immigrants as
majority
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the majority
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 of
urban
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the urban
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population
 comprises
of
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immigrants. Apart from
this
, adjacent areas of
cities
 can be developed to generate employment opportunities.
For instance
, the areas in
vicinity
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the vicinity
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 of Noida are developed to cater
the
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 needs of
growing
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the growing
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population
 eventually, causes
the
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 decline in the crime rate.
Therefore
,
formation
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 and implementation of rules and extension of
cities
 are some of the remedies to mitigate the problem. In compendium, to reduce the unlawful act norms should be implemented and job opportunities should be created by
government
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the government
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 to reduce
unemployment
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the unemployment
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 ratio.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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