Young people today are better qualified than they were in the past. Some people argue that this is because competition for jobs is greater than it used to be. Others say that people only continue their education because the opportunities exist for them to do so. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The given diagram illustrates the
process
of producing
leather
products. It is obvious that there are 11 stages in
this
process
starting with drying animal skin and culminating with stocking in stores. As can be seen from the
process
, Animal skin
are
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dried and
then
transported to a
leather
factory. The main stages of producing
leather
goods start from here where
first
, the transported
leather
is washed with
a
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solvation of water and lime and after
that
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it is soaked in lime,
then
the flattening
process
starts with two big round rollers which flatten the
leather
. Out of the remaining steps, again, the flattened
leather
is put in the solvation of tannin which contains water and vegetable matter and after
that
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the
leather
is polished to become ready to be transported to the factory again. The
last
stage is stocking the products in
leather
shops where people can choose and buy them.
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