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Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Dear Ashwini, Hope you are doing well! I heard that you are planning to buy a car and so you want to start learning
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how to drive a car. I always recommend you to get a driving license and
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 to make sure to carry that with you
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 times. To carry a driving license has
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 own benefits of saving us from any unforeseen incidents that may occur or
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not be caught by the police officials for any reason. You can check out the driving school near to your house called the
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 driving school where they teach driving in both simulation and on-road classes.
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 keep in mind to always check on the rear mirrors while you drive as you may have
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 and have your seatbelts on to have a safe ride. Wishing you all the best and I am longing to meet you. Love Jenifer
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