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Some people prefer to be nocturnal during exam days and go through the entire syllabus in the last few days, whereas others have regular habits, studying a little every day. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both studying patterns and choose which one is a better way of action according to you.

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The graph illustrates
consumption
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the consumption
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 of 4
meats
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types of meat
slices of meat
lumps of meat
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 (
chicken
, beef, lamb and
fish
) in Europe in the years 1979 to 2004
period
. Units are measured in grams for weight. Overall,
usage
 of
Chicken
 in the market seems gradually rising while other
meats
consumption
 was decreasing dramatically.
Moreover
, the
fish
usage
 seems comparatively constant comparing to other
meats
 during the same
period
. Weekly
usage
 of the
chicken
 has risen from about 150g to 250g during
period
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the period
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 of 1979 to 2004.
Similarly
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,Similarly
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 in
this
period
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,period
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 other
meats
such
 as the Beef, lamb and
fish
 shows gradually decrease comparing to the
chicken
. In fact, 1979 highest
usage
 per week marked by Beef nearly 225g has decreased to about 100g and lamb
usage
 has dropped from 150g to near 50g while
fish
consumption
also
 appeared constant drop. The
fish
 market achieves its highest
consumption
 in 1979 about 60g and it maintains weekly
consumption
 compared to other
meats
 constantly till 2004.
However
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 the
fish
 market reaches their lowest week use below 50g in the year of 2004.
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