Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is just a waste of time DIscuss both views and give your opinion.

People have mixed opinions regarding
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absence
art
classes in the syllabus as some of them find it
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part of the study time while others do not. Even though
art
can be very crucial for
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pupil
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, we can
also
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address
other aspects which deteriorate its importance.
Art
tends to be a highly demanded subject in
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human society as
this
contributes to
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the development
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of skills
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quantify our dimensional and reflecting abilities.
In other words
,
art
being taught
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young age is able to accelerate and involve aspects of personality and
character defining
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a true man of
art
.
On the other hand
, it is
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prevalent
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and strong argument that
art
studies
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worthless disposal of study time. The thing
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  • problem-solving
  • cultural awareness
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