Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that it is very hard for
individuals
to resolve any environmental
issues
. Others,
however
, believe that
individuals
has
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to take some
actions
before the
government
can resolve the environmental
issues
. While environmental
issues
is
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one of the big
topic
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for every nation to deal with and it is impossible for
individuals
to resolve by themselves without getting
government
support
. But I believe that
individuals
does
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play an important role
on
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resolving environmental
issues
and
government
should be providing resources and funding to
support
them.
Firstly
, environmental
issues
do exist in every country no matter in
development
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developing
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nations or in
undevelopment
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undeveloped
nations.
Such
as global warming, acid rain, air pollution and water pollution. The
casue
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cause
of these
issues
most likely are done by human activities like we drive a car
that is
burning off
the
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fuel and releasing lots of carbon dioxide. Producing more carbon dioxide in the air is one of the causes of global warming. It is everyone's responsibility to do something to minimise the damage we do to the environment.
However
,
this
is not an easy job for
indivudals
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individuals
to resolve as each of the environmental
problem
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problems
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is
cuased
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caused
by many parties, groups and organisations.
Secondly
,
although
environmental
issues
are very big and it is impossible for
individuals
to resolve like global warming. But
individuals
can start taking some
actions
like install
solar
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a solar
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panel
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panels
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at home to minimise
wasting
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the wasting
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of energy and
also
using public transport or sharing a car to reduce producing lots of carbon
dixoide
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dioxide
.
On the other hand
, to resolve the environmental
issues
, each nation's
government
should
also
taking
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take
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some
actions
to
support
individuals
such
as
provding
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providing
incentive
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incentives
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for people who are willing to install
solar
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a solar
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panel
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panels
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at home or providing free parking near
to
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buses/trains stations if
individuals
are willing to take public transport for their journey. In
colclusion
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conclusion
collusion
, it is our
responsbility
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responsibility
to do something to resolve any environmental
issues
. It is important for each nation's
government
to set up some rules and regulations to
support
individuals
. If nobody taking any
actions
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action
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, our world will get damage and there has no
furture
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future
for kids to live and enjoy.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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