Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam.’ How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

over the past thirty-year, car's

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sharply and the world's cities are struggling with

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jams.

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situation, why I feel

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what are some potential measures

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can resolve

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. There are the two main reasons, why

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jams are increasing .

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, social status is being loved to show - up by the people. Generally, folks want to show their luxuries life and the best way to show-up by their expensive

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, which increased so much

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on the road because of the population there are numerous

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on the road.

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, in many cities of the world, public

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systems are not being great.

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, in Mumbai, the public

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system is not enough for the public due to the massive crowd in the city, so in the end, people use their own

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for travelling. These circumstances are causing a considerable amount of

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jams in the world. Some solutions can be adopted by the

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to discourage people from using their

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can be increased quantities and frequencies of public

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buses, trains, metros etc... It will help in

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control. For, instance, In the Germany Public

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system is amazing and for shorts , the distance they prefer cycles which is eco-friendly for the environment.

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make strict

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rules

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, In Delhi, the State

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make rules for

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control, which is called odd-even. In

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rule, city dwellers use their own car according to their number plate. If the car plate number is odd so it will be run on odd dates

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as 1,3,5 etc vice versa happened on even

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. In conclusion,

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situation, happening due to social status, and a worse

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system.

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presenting that solutions to

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issue are twofold increase public

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and make strict rules for

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