Some people believe that travelling is a valuable experience; others say it is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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a trip
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, other group
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another group
other groups
people
thinks that it is drastic
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a drastic
time
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To begin
with, most people
spending a lot of money on accommodation and their time
travelling.In addition
, there is a delay in the duration of hours in travelling to their destinations. Airports detain customers due to quarantine,
because many Remove the comma
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people
fly from the airport to other countries, if one of the people
gets sick, then
everyone may be in danger. For example
, my older brother buys tickets to Turkey, but on the day of departure
they are delayed by 3 hours due to the illness of one of the clients. Add a comma
,departure
therefore
my brother had to buy tickets a second
time
for another flight.
On other hand, they can learn to survive in other countries and develop communication skills with other people
.in addition
, during the trip
, they can learn the language of another country and learn more about other cultures. For example
, when I came to Russia, I did not speak Russian, but communicating with Russian people
helps me to improve my speaking skills in Russian.Moreover
, I learned more about their culture and now I can easily communicate with other people
.
To summarize, I agree that the trip
is a waste of time
. Although
this
trip
can help people
improve their communication skills, learn to survive in other countries and learn more about another culture.Submitted by zhadyra.serikbayeva2016 on
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