Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.
Nowadays, parent’s wants to nurture their children by engaging them
in activity
as it will develop their motor and cognitive skills. Correct your spelling
inactivity
However
, people think recreation is essential for the development of young child
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children
compare
to reading. I totally agree with Change the form of the verb
compared
this
notion, why inactivity is more beneficial for the betterment of toddler
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toddlers
instead
of reading and I will state my reason with examples.
To begin
with, it is not necessary that reading will help to develop various skills at the same time. Furthermore
, there is not any fixed age of learning or reading concept also
as we know that youngster learn many of activities by observing, experiment and so forth. Thus
, not only by reading but also
by adopting various skill
the children learn more fitness ideas and physical exercise. To illustrate, when Fix the agreement mistake
skills
little
child will force to read books or any materials Add an article
the little
a little
then
they used to avoid the task and they are shows
more interest by playing games or activities. Change the verb form
are showing
are shown
As a result
, they can develop social and mental skills in their life.
Secondly
, in addition
, by playing they can improve various qualities such
as leadership, self-confidence, decision making and so on. Besides
, child -
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child-centred
centered
approach will Change the spelling
centred
helps
them to make decisions and solve problems as well as Change the verb form
help
it
allows kids to develop confidently and independently. In the same way, Correct pronoun usage
apply
by
pursuing hobbies like craft, art, music, dance and so forth will motivate Change preposition
apply
to
contribute Correct pronoun usage
them to
in
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to
project
by innovative ideas and they feel relaxed by doing, Add an article
the project
a project
experiment
in Add an article
an experiment
real
world. Add an article
the real
For instance
, through current
survey Correct article usage
the current
scientist
experienced Fix the agreement mistake
scientists
by
Change preposition
apply
self-development
the offspring will be surrounded by Add a comma
,self-development
environment
with Add an article
the environment
an environment
positive
attitude, learn from mistakes, collaborate with others.
In conclusion, Add an article
a positive
I’m strongly believe
that pursuit action Change the verb form
I strongly believe
play
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plays
very
important role during primary education. Add an article
a very
In contrast
, students can be more focus
on reading from their secondary education. Replace the word
focused
Likewise
, they can develop creativity or imagination and to
become an ideal and successful citizen of the country.Change the verb form
apply
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