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Doctors recommend that older people should get regular exercise. However many older people do not take enough exercise. What could be the reason for this? What can be done to encourage them to take exercise?

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Doctors recommend that older
humans
 should accept always
exercise
.
However
 much older
humans
 do not take enough
exercise
. In
this
 day and, most
people
 tend to
view
 things differently, even
whether
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though
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 Doctors recommend that older
humans
 should
accept
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apply
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always
exercise
.
However
 much older
humans
 do not take enough
exercise
. to some
groups
, they think that many older
people
 do not
take
Verb problem
get
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 enough
exercise
.
this
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despite, it seems to me that, I still believe that older
people
 should get regular
exercise
. the following cases and examples will help support my point of
view
. First of all, I would like to point out that many older
people
 do not
take
Verb problem
get
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 enough
exercise
.
as
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 a,result many older
people
 do not take enough
exercise
 make do not healthy
body
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bodies
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,
in addition
 older
people
 do not have who take care so should take enough
exercise
 more and more by way of example walking,
as well as
 eating
food
 to have benefit,
also
 eat
food
 all 5
food
groups
.
However
,
this
 is an accepted fact that older
humans
 should
accept
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apply
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always
exercise
.
for
this
 reason make
the
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a
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 healthy body
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, for example,
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for example
 walk usually eat
food
 all 5
food
groups
,
as well as
 relax.
To sum up
, in spite of the fact that
,
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apply
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 it is hard to make all
people
view
 things in the same
may
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way
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, even in the case
of
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apply
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Doctors recommend that older
humans
 should
accept
Verb problem
apply
show examples
always
exercise
.
However
 much older
humans
 do not take enough
exercise
. some
groups
 may agree that many older
people
 do not
take
Verb problem
get
show examples
 enough
exercise
. despite, to me, I still agree that older
people
 should get regular
exercise
. the case and examples mentioned above have supported my point of
view
 to the best.
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