Doctors recommend that older people should get regular exercise. However many older people do not take enough exercise. What could be the reason for this? What can be done to encourage them to take exercise?

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despite, it seems to me that, I still believe that older
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for example
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it is hard to make all
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Doctors recommend that older
humans
should
accept
Verb problem
apply
show examples
always
exercise
.
However
much older
humans
do not take enough
exercise
. some
groups
may agree that many older
people
do not
take
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get
show examples
enough
exercise
. despite, to me, I still agree that older
people
should get regular
exercise
. the case and examples mentioned above have supported my point of
view
to the best.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • physical activity
  • low-impact exercise
  • chronic conditions
  • senior-friendly
  • public awareness campaigns
  • group exercise classes
  • motivation
  • health maintenance
  • financial constraints
  • supervised workout sessions
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