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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are reasons for this? How can people research this?

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Nowadays, there are
increasing
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 amount of
people
 being interested in learning about the
history
 of their apartments. There are several reasons for
this
, but it’s mostly personal passion. They search the archives of
city
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 or surf the Internet to find out interesting facts about the building they live in. There are plenty of
houses
 which have historical importance.
For instance
, there are still
houses
 in old german style in Kaliningrad, which was the former capital of East Prussia. The architecture of buildings or the design may illustrate the way the
people
 lived in the past.
People
 can discover astonishing information about their
houses
, which can be an
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 new experience.
For example
, there is a huge possibility that the famous person lived in the house in which the interested one lives now. There are plenty of veterans’
houses
 in Kyzylorda. Now
people
 have a wide range of ways to find out information about their
houses
. The
history
 of cities has been taught through the ages, so citizens remember it.
Moreover
, it can be saved in archives or on the
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 of
certain
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city
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cities
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.
People
 may find the
history
 of the building going to town halls, where they can search the documentation and the other papers to get acknowledged about their
houses
. Taking everything into account, the main reasons why
people
 are becoming interested in finding out about the
history
 of the house they live in because it is
new
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 experience and they may find out that their
houses
 had historical importance in the past. Modern
people
 have an opportunity to find
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information like cities’ websites and
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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