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Machine translation (MT) is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans.

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Nowadays, it is argued that the use of machine
translation
 will not overcome human
translation
 because it is slow and it sometimes makes some mistakes In
this
 essay, I am going to explain the reason why I strongly disagree with the statement and
then
 I will give some examples.
Firstly
, I believe that technology is improving
day
 by
day
 and I am sure that in the future the machine
translation
 will be enough developed, without mistakes or imperfections, and for
this
 reason, I think that
people
 will begin to use that kind of instrument for talking with others in light of the fact that we can speak all languages even if we do not anything about that and we have never heard before.
Although
 the
english
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 language will continue to be spoken by the majority of tourists, It is important to understand
also
 the importance of some instruments because not all
people
 can speak more than their native language and for
this
 reason, you can dialogue with
people
 who come from different countries without problems.
On the contrary
,
this
 kind of tool need
Internet
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the Internet
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 for searching all the information and sometimes it could be a problem if the signal is low or absent and in my opinion,
this
 is the only adverse consequence. In conclusion, electronic instruments are developing every
day
 as a consequence that one
day
 we will use
the
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machine
translation
 because it can be extremely useful when we talk with
people
 who do not speak our language and it could
difficult
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be difficult
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 to create a speech.
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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