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Some industry leaders below that children should learn computer programming in primary school. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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. They can do any program of billing software and business people on demand. Students can run our private work through school networks and it will reduce the burden of parents.
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 can build carrier in life and
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 In conclusion, according to my viewpoint teaching computer in schools is very beneficial for
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industry leaders
  • primary school
  • computer programming
  • job market
  • problem-solving
  • critical thinking
  • creativity
  • innovation
  • gender gap
  • technology
  • confidence
  • self-esteem
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