You saw an advert for the post of finance manager at the vacancy board. You want to apply for the same job. But, you have been late for applying for the same. Write a letter along with your resume to your prospective employer. In your letter • introduce yourself • talkaboutyourskills • reasonsforyourdelay

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Nikita; I am holding 8 years of experience in
finance
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the finance
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sector. I am currently working with Amazon as
a
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Assistant Manager. I am writing
this
letter to show my interest
for
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the
post
of Finance Manager which is posted at the vacancy
post
by your organisation and share the reason for the delay in response. Let me give details about my skills. I have completed my
post graduation
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from Delhi University in Finance and Accounting stream.
Moreover
, I have worked with big
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and have exposure
of
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managing high worth companies
besides
that I have expertise in managing firm cost accounting.
Therefore
, I believe that my skills will
suitable
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for
this
post
. Enclosed is my resume for your
references
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. As I am late in submitting the resume the reason for
such
was I met with an accident and got hospitalised;
therefore
I could submit the application before the due date. I would request you to please consider my application. I will be available at any time
next
week any time for the interview. I solicit your cooperation and wait for your revert. Yours faithfully, Nikita.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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