The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?
The indefinite article, a, may be redundant when used with the uncountable noun trouble in your sentence. Consider removing it.
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It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase In this essay. Consider adding a comma.
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It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
The indefinite article, a, may be redundant when used with the uncountable noun research in your sentence. Consider removing it.
The noun phrase overweight population seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that you are missing a comma or two with the interrupter as well as the risk of having health problems. Consider adding the comma(s).
It appears that the verb rose should be in the past participle form. Consider changing it.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It appears that the verb lead should be in the to-infinitive form. Consider adding the word to.
When speaking directly to people, their names must be set off by commas. Consider adding the comma(s).
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.