Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is unrefutable that music and art have always been an

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human kind

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. Through art,

people

can share their feeling, their perspective, and the most important

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, convey exemplary gestures throughout the world. One argument states that

artists

should have full control over their ideas and products rather than be influenced by any other operation.

This

essay will give reasons to advocate

this

statement about the freedom of the creativity of

artists

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First

of all,

arts

can only be made

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the perspective of

artists

toward the world. It is undeniable that many

people

have overcome the difficult time in their life because

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arts

, they have found the harmony with the souls of

artists

and realized that there is someone have the same feeling as they do,

thus

give them strengths to live.

However

, if society

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the same standard for every genre, the variations of

arts

will be significantly reduced,

therefore

, it will isolate plenty of struggling

people

.

Secondly

, if

artists

cannot have the freedom to express their feelings, the quality of their products will be severely affected. Every artist has their own style, their own technique,

thus

, it is impossible to demand them to follow the standard path, cut down their source of creativity. And even if there is some way that can be applied, the quality of

arts

will definitely decline.

For instance

, Picasso and Monet have their own signature style and it will surely reduce the value of their works if

people

see Monet’s painting under Picasso’s techniques and

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versa. In conclusion, the notion that

artists

should have the freedom of expression

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their works is something I wholeheartedly agree with.

This

is due to the fact that the variety and quality of

arts

will reduce if we apply the same standard for every

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