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the school can play a significant role in persons life. discuss about your opinion.

#school #role #persons #life
At present, being self-employed has become more popular.
On the other hand
, some
people
 still prefer to be employed by companies. There are many arguments in
favor
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 of the idea that self-employment is better than working in a company.
First
 of all, being self-employed leads to life's flexibility.
People
 can control their working schedule when they
work
 alone.
For example
, freelances, one of the most popular occupations for
young
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the young
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 generation, can adjust their working hour without asking for
supervisor's
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 approval.
Moreover
, they can leave their
work
 on weekdays while most of the office workers are not
allow
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 to
do
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. Another positive aspect is that self-employment helps
people
 have more
work
-life balance. When
people
work
 independently, they manage their workload properly. Plus, According to
a
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recent research,
people
 who
work
 in companies generally have a worse workload than
people
 who are self-employed.
However
, there are some drawbacks to being self-employed. The most common criticism is the fact that individuals are normally not
financial
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secure
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 when they don't
work
 in organisations. The number of companies
provide
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 monthly salary to their employees while earning by yourself can not
garantee
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guarantee
 your income in the future. Another negative effect is that self-employment doesn't give
people
 benefits,
such
 as
bonus
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, medical support, new year gift, and so on. For
instant
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, Dow,
a
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the
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 world's leading material science company, provides their employees
7-month
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a 7-month
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 bonus, according to a study. To sum up,
this
 essay
discuss
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 both pros and cons of self-
emploment
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employment
.
People
 who are
insterested
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interested
 in it should consider all of these advantages and disadvantages before making a decision whether to be self-employed or not.
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