Some people think that managers alone should make decisions in the company, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision making process. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that making decisions is one of the necessary parts
in
Change preposition
of
show examples
the
company
. Most individuals view only directors have to solve problems, while others see it as something wrong and principal staff should participate in the problem-solving and
decision making
Add a hyphen
decision-making
show examples
processes. I totally agree that employees should have an opportunity to add their own opinions. On the one hand, it is a widespread belief which says that only supervisors must deal with problems and
to
Fix the infinitive
apply
show examples
take
Correct your spelling
make
show examples
all determinations.
However
, they have interactive communication skills, conflict resolution
skill
Fix the agreement mistake
skills
show examples
and
ability
Correct article usage
the ability
show examples
to delegate, which helps them to manage
big
Add an article
the big
a big
show examples
company
Fix the agreement mistake
companies
show examples
.
Moreover
, it would be better in order to save time, because
director
Add an article
the director
show examples
will
listen
Add the preposition
tolisten
show examples
only
his
Change preposition
to his
show examples
own thoughts and he will not spend time
on
Change preposition
apply
show examples
listening
others’
Change preposition
to others’
show examples
opinion
Fix the agreement mistake
opinions
show examples
.
Similarly
,
manager
Add an article
the manager
show examples
knows every detail and data about his own business. For
this
reason, he can give
achievable
Add an article
an achievable
show examples
and maximum realistic
solution
Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
show examples
for the problem, which contains
economical
Add an article
the economical
show examples
and financial status of the
company
.
For example
,
multi millionaire
Add a hyphen
multi-millionaire
show examples
Jh. Sountburg saved his
company
due to the old information of
company
Add an article
the company
show examples
in 2010.
On the other hand
, it is significant to have
the
Correct article usage
a
show examples
friendship
Replace the word
friendly
show examples
atmosphere in
company
Add an article
the company
show examples
.
Therefore
, workers should be included in
decision-making
Add an article
the decision-making
show examples
process in order to consider everyone’s
opinion
.
Also
Add a comma
,Also
show examples
they start to care about
company’s
Correct article usage
the company’s
show examples
future and take
a
Remove the article
apply
show examples
full responsibility in the workplace
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
because every their vote and
opinion
will be counted. There will be different beneficial and interesting ideas, which can develop the image of the
company
. To exemplify, in 2014, ‘MI’ lost a huge number of buyers because of the limited amount of
idea
Fix the agreement mistake
ideas
show examples
and with the help of workers of
company
Add an article
the company
a company
show examples
, ‘MI’
company
was saved. In conclusion, it is
an
Change the article
a
show examples
common
opinion
that only
employee
Fix the agreement mistake
employees
show examples
should make a decision, but I believe that it would be more beneficial if workers will be involved in the
problem solving
Add a hyphen
problem-solving
show examples
processes of the
company
in order to get convenient and useful ideas and solutions.
Submitted by zhadyra.serikbayeva2016 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: