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Many adults nowadays prefer spending their free time playing computer games. Why do they do this? Is this a positive or negative development?

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Playing
video
games
 among
young
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the young
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 generation has become a part and parcel of their life. Presently, adults prefer to spend their leisure
time
 on mobile
screen
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screens
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 because of the convenience of the internet.
This
 essay intends to analyze the reasons that why
new
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the new
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 generation give preference to
video
games
 for spending their free hours. In my opinion,
this
 is both positive and negative development
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 There are several factors reasonable behind the rising popularity of computer
games
, the most important of which relate to the sophistication of technology. Due to the development of technology it has become easier to spend spare
time
with
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full of enjoyment because, nowadays, ample amount of
attractivegames
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attractive games
, PubG, Free Fire, Subway Surf and many more, which allure adolescents to play. Another factor is that
schedule
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 of every person has become very busy and they have very
less
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little
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time
 for playing so when they get free
time
 they prefer to refresh their mind by playing virtual
games
 as compared to physical activities.
Therefore
, youth is attracting
towards
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to
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video
games
. Online
games
 have both positive and negative
impact
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impacts
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 on people’s
lifestyle
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lifestyles
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.
Firstly
, I will discuss
positive
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the positive
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 side, virtual
games
 act as a good stress buster for youngsters as they can refresh their mind and rejuvenate themselves. Along with
this
, children can enhance their intellectual power
also
.
However
, talking about its adverse effects, computer
games
 really affect people’s health because most of the youngers
glued
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are glued
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 to the screens which
gives
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give
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 birth to
different
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a different
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type
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types
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 of ailments like vision impairment, obesity, heart diseases and so on. To conclude, as per my above discussion, I opine that new generation usually prefer to spend their free hours on
video
games
 and it affects their healthy lifestyle and makes them addicted to computer
games
also
, but virtual
games
 enhance children’s mental ability but if they utilize it at a certain extent.
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