Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep.what problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

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diseases , health conditions as well as remedies that can impose to reduces sleeping illness.
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of sleep for a human
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of mental diseases as well as beauty impacts.
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Deepika Padukone had been suffered from severe
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are the other remedies that can do for reduce illness of sleeping. In conclusion, I believe that there are mass
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those symptoms among
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Insomnia
  • Sleep deprivation
  • Sleep disorders
  • Sleep quality
  • Fatigue
  • Exhaustion
  • Restless
  • Restorative sleep
  • REM sleep
  • Circadian rhythm
  • Sleep hygiene
  • Napping
  • Sleep duration
  • Melatonin
  • Sleep-inducing
  • Drowsiness
  • Sleep disturbances
  • Obstructive sleep apnea
  • Snoring
  • Sleepwalking
  • Sleep talking
  • Shift work
  • Sleeping pills
  • Sleep aid
  • Relaxation techniques
  • Meditation
  • Deep breathing
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