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Task one write a report for a university lecturer describe the information show below

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The information about regarding the global expenditure on varied sectors, worldwide population and utilisation of available
resources
 in distant parts of the word is elucidated In pie charts.overall, it can be inferred that most of the financial
resources
 invested were unspecified, more than half of world's residents were in Asia and usage of
resources
 was more in the USA and Europe. As it is clear from the chart that 24% of world spending was spent on food items. The investment in the housing sector was doubled as compare clothing which was accounted for 6% and transport figure was threefold
then
 clothing.while two-fifth of total world output was spent on the unknown sector. Probing
further
, more than half the global populace were accounted in Asia. Whereas, Europe and the Americas had the same global community (14%).
Moreover
, 1/5 of the global populace was noticed in Africa and half of
this
in
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Furthermore
, 60%of
resources
 were utilised by USA & Europe while two-fifth of total
resources
 were consumed by and unspecified.
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