some people say History is one of the most important school subjects, other people think that, in today's world subjects like science and technology are more important than history.

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science and technology are more crucial than past. Education is importunate, the prime advantage of education is we can do anything with wisdom knowledge is a weapon for and example past is crucial because what we are doing, Doing with the help of past experiences so past is should be
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on the basis of past experience.
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, sometimes history classes are boring and it totally depends on person to person but there are many books which are important for growth. On the other, Science and Technology comes there is the relation between both, automation contributes the humanity in a distingeves ways
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and maybe more with the help of research of and development humanity is growing exponentially because the understanding of how social and material element influence the production of new particles, new ways of understanding the automation with help of new modern vital research institutes which develops the new technology to
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both are interrelated with each other without each other, without past experience development cannot be possible and vice-versa.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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