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Some people believe that modern technology encourages more sociable behaviour. Others say that this leads to lesser sociable behaviour. Discuss both views with examples and provide your opinion.

#people #technology #behaviour
The is no doubt that
technology
 is giving new ways for
people
 to keep in touch with their friends and family by using the Internet.
This
 phenomenon is offering manifold benefits to
people
, while it
also
 bringing some disadvantages,
such
 as being less social with others. The following paragraphs will analyze both views and give my opinion. On the one hand, the various social media applications,
for example
, Facebook and Facetime, those apps which provide the functions that give
people
 online chats and online interviews.
Although
 many international students leaving own country for study, he or she still can use related websites or applications to in touch with other
people
 whom they would love to despite they do not stay in the same nation. It is clear that anyone won't be limited by time or space, it can easier communicate with others.
On the other hand
, on the negative side,
technology
also
 can pose a threat to
people
's social skills,
for instance
, communication and interpersonal skills. The main reason is they do not understand how do they do during the conversation. It would cause
people
 to give up interacting with each other in real life.
Finally
, it can lead to con-social behaviours in the real world. Another fact can be seen is
people
 prefer using electronic products to contact business clients or relatives rather than using the face-to-face method because it is not only more convenient to connect, but
also
 do not waste time. In conclusion, the changes in
technology
 are necessary for society, it improves the quality of our living. The most important is
people
 should know the pros and cons when they using the new
technology
, and remember the new
technology
 just decrease the inconvenience issues in our life, it does not represent can solve all of the problems we meet.
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