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Fewer schools are requiring children to learn and improve their hand writing skills

#schools #children #hand #skills
In the modern ,era most
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schools have started using cutting edge technology and
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 ignored
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handwriting
skills
that is
 a negative trend. Handwriting
skills
 enhance brain ability
consequently
,the children who use pen and pencil for handwriting are active and smart.
Moreover
, It causes brainstorming in children and helps them to learn grammar and spelling
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as a result
 it they can express their ideas without any mistakes.
In addition
, good handwriting helps to get good bands in exams and poor handwriting brings bad scores. Laptops acquire electronic and stable Internet connection but sometimes you have to complete your task by handwriting if the Internet connection gets disconnected. With advancements in technology , schools are using gadgets for handwriting. Because most people think that why students should waste their time in learning handwriting
skills
 that not only will save their energy but
also
 their time. For ,example handwriting has vanished completely from Poland completely.
Furthermore
, there are autocorrect applications
such
 as Grammarly that correct your grammar and spelling mistakes. Most
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the exams are computer-based so you will grab good marks because poor handwriting would cause bad scores. Laptops have taken over the businesses too and even company demands
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IT
skills
.
Therefore
, the main purpose of schools is to get ready their pupils for
further
 life and help them to get a good job in practical life. In the conclusion, both sides of the argument have their own merits but in my opinion,
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still
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 handwriting is used in we should not deny the importance of handwriting in most working places due to that reason we can’t deny the importance of handwriting.
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