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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development

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It is argued that
technology
 has transformed the ways of communication and influenced relationships in many forms. Whereas some
people
 subscribe to the view that the
technology
 development has caused
vary
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 bad effects in how
people
interaction
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 in daily life. In my opinion, I personally believe that
although
technology
 has some negative aspects, its impact on
people
’s lives has been largely positive. Looked at the advantages more closely, it is obvious that the most important benefit of advanced communication tools is that they have had a beneficial impact on relationships in business, education, and social life. More particularly, thanks to the Internet, businesspeople around the globe are able to connect with others effortlessly.
In addition
, online applications and services create a convenient and effective connection between students and teachers.
For example
, students have access to a wide range of lessons available on the Internet as well as apps
such
 as zoom, google meet and sky that allow them to connect with the teachers no matter where they are.
Furthermore
, many
people
 use social media in order to communicate with new
people
 and find ones who share common interests, habits, and they interact through their computers rather than face to face.
However
, despite these advances, the quality of interaction has significantly declined in several ways. If
people
 are developing most of their relationships online,
this
 means that they may
also
 have less
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 contact.
This
 kind of connection between
people
 is essential for human beings to feel belonging as a member of society.
This
 may be a principal problem for children's social development because they used to be seen playing out on the streets with their friends that leading them
are
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 often indoors and too depending on modern devices including
smartphone
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 and TV. With all reasons mentioned above, I consider that
technology
 has a great improvement in the communication between
people
, but not all of the outcomes of
this
 revolution have been positive.
Therefore
, it depends on the way
people
 use and control
the
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modern tools and should be applied wisely.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Interact
  • Social media platforms
  • Networking
  • Instant messaging
  • Face-to-face interaction
  • Misunderstandings
  • Emotional context
  • Superficial connections
  • Deceptive identities
  • Privacy concerns
  • Social skills
  • Video calls
  • Online presence
  • Digital communication
  • Cyber relationships
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