There have been many inventions in human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Humans have been creating tremendous inventions from the past till

present

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and seem never going to stop. Some persons believe the greatest creation is the wheel while others say the

Internet

.

This

essay strongly agrees that the

Internet

is

one

of the most essential groundbreaking innovations of humanity but not the only

one

. On the

one

hand, the evolution of

human

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started

in

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a long time ago since the

first

caveman found out how to kindle fire, after

that other troglodytes

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that other troglodyte

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who lived in the same area

with

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as

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him knew how to do so. Human beings like to be together as

agroup

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a group

and sharing like the

first

group

cave

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dweller that could handle fire.

Whlist

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Whilst

the other primitive men who lived far away might found

this

approach in the

next

decade. What would

happended

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happened

happen

if people could

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connected

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with each other since that? How fast of human development would be? Working as a team and potioning

knowledges

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knowledge

pieces of knowledge

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are the base of human breakthrough and the

Internet

has

such

a big role in it. It helps people explore the world the

the

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screen and learn. It destroys the wall of study and other fields as well. We could say the advancement of mankind between

this

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ten years is from the

Internet

.

On the other hand

, even the network is

one

of the biggest

step

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of adaptation,

however

, it definitely is not the most

nescessary

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necessary

thing.

For example

, if a man

lost

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is lost

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in the woods where has no signal the

Internet

would not help him to survive;

water

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a water

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bottle, electricity, and fire would save his life for sure.

This

shows

human

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humans

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can live without the

Internet

. In conclusion,

although

the

Internet

is might not the most quintessential design but it is undeniably the path to the

next

foot step

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footstep

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of humanity.