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Nowadays, families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this. Why is this happening? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

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There has been a trend over recent decades for families to become less close than they were in the past and
this
 situation is largely accepted in society Now we will discuss the reason for
this
 and examine the
Advantages
 and
Disadvantages
 of
this
 development. One of the
reason
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 for less close to family is a busy
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lifestyle
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life style
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 or workload which can be seen as less
closer
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 to
there
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their
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 family than they were in the past .And it is not same in every region nuclear
family's
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families
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 exist in rural areas and urban areas people do like privacy and independence they
reffer
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refer
offer
 to
small
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 family or independent family the desire of having better lifestyle make people less
closer
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close
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 to there family and it is becoming a new trend to be live in a small family
instead
 of joint family. So the
Advantages
 and
Disadvantages
 of less
closer
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 to family than they were in past are
Advantages
 of less
closer
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 to
family
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the family
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 is full independence and better lifestyle can make his own decisions no restriction would be seen
Disadvantages
 of less
closer
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close
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 to family are no
guidence
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guidance
 will be there and no one is there to listen about our problems or difficulty no one will appreciate us and there are
less
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advantages
 as we see of less
closer
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 to family and have more
disadvantages
 so that because we should move towards the nuclear family or we can say
joint
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 family.
This
 concludes ,there are both factors which we can see in less close family
Advantages
 and
Disadvantages
 but there are more
disadvantages
 of
less
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closer
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 family
instead
 of
advantages
 so individuals should make their desire at some level and move towards the nuclear family trend which is better for our mental health and physical health
also
.
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