Nowadays, families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this. Why is this happening? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

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There has been a trend over recent decades for families to become less close than they were in the past and
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situation is largely accepted in society Now we will discuss the reason for
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and examine the
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development. One of the
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for less close to family is a busy
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life style
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or workload which can be seen as less
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family than they were in the past .And it is not same in every region nuclear
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exist in rural areas and urban areas people do like privacy and independence they
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family or independent family the desire of having better lifestyle make people less
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to there family and it is becoming a new trend to be live in a small family
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of joint family. So the
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of less
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to family than they were in past are
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to
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is full independence and better lifestyle can make his own decisions no restriction would be seen
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of less
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to family are no
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will be there and no one is there to listen about our problems or difficulty no one will appreciate us and there are
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as we see of less
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to family and have more
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so that because we should move towards the nuclear family or we can say
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family.
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concludes ,there are both factors which we can see in less close family
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and
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but there are more
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closer
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family
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so individuals should make their desire at some level and move towards the nuclear family trend which is better for our mental health and physical health
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancements
  • Social media
  • Face-to-face interaction
  • Geographical mobility
  • Generational differences
  • Individual independence
  • Personal growth
  • Mental health
  • Well-being
  • Family bonds
  • Cultural traditions
  • Familial support systems
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