All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?
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the
vehicles with fossil fuels should Correct article usage
apply
be entirely forbid
and encourage Change the verb form
be entirely forbidden
using
electric Change the verb form
to use
cars
. I agree with Use synonyms
this
statement because it is the only option of environmental friendly option and encourages to Linking Words
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sources
energy
.
people are using Use synonyms
the
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apply
cars
which burns more fuel Use synonyms
energy
and has a Use synonyms
danger
of Use synonyms
of
air pollution with Remove the redundancy
apply
gas
emissions. Use synonyms
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produces
more toxic Change the verb form
produce
gas
emissions which are not environment friendly and in Use synonyms
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return
returns
these gases can endanger the different species which are living on the earth. Add a comma
,returns
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apply
gas
when people are using Use synonyms
for
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it for
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danger
as in return it is Replace the word
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non-renewable
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a non-renewable
the non-renewable
energy
source. Use synonyms
Secondly
,encouraging Linking Words
public
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the public
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humans
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rays that Correct your spelling
UV
produces
in fossil fuel Change the verb form
produce
cars
. Use synonyms
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introduction
of electric Add an article
the introduction
cars
be helpful because of less fuel and there will be Use synonyms
set
of applications Correct article usage
a set
which
are monitored and Correct pronoun usage
that
it
is easy to access.
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apply
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Government
introducing more electric Correct article usage
the Government
cars
and encouraging Use synonyms
public
to buy electric Add an article
the public
cars
. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
this
can be a Linking Words
life saver
. Correct your spelling
lifesaver
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cars
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which
are Correct pronoun usage
that
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fewer
energy
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differnt
schemes which are affordable Correct your spelling
different
of
buying electric Change preposition
for
cars
. Use synonyms
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, electric Linking Words
cars
are less space and need to connect with a Use synonyms
power saving
application which Add a hyphen
power-saving
are
related to the solar Change the verb form
is
energy
because of natural Use synonyms
gas
producers it is less Use synonyms
danger
and renewable source of Use synonyms
energy
. Use synonyms
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, it is Linking Words
best
alternative solution in which it runs with power consumption Correct article usage
the best
energy
and battery full recharged. Use synonyms
These kind
of vehicles needs encouragement and adopted world Change the determiner
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These kinds
widely
as soon as possible to stop the Replace the word
wide
danger
that affects Use synonyms
environment
.
To conclude,I firmly believe Add an article
the environment
that encouraging electric
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that encouraging electric car
those encouraging electric cars
cars
are advisable to the public because of less pollution and environmental Use synonyms
danger
. Use synonyms
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with
the Change preposition
to
power consuming
task which can be helpful from people's lives at risk.Add a hyphen
power-consuming
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