Some people think that formal education should start for children as early as possible, while others think that it should not start until 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Majority
of individuals consider that Correct article usage
The majority
children
should start school education at earlier ages
, whilst others suppose that children
must to
relax Change the verb form
apply
at
Change preposition
in
childhood
. It is evidenced that some people are related to study Change preposition
at in
in
early Correct your spelling
an
ages
but some people are not possible to do it. Fix the agreement mistake
age
This
essay will discuss ways of coping with problem
of Add an article
the problem
children
education .
Firstly
, all kids should have a good childhood
that will be remembered in memories for whole life, because this
stage of life is full of the
remarkable moments. Scientists proved that people’s imagination and creativity skills start Correct article usage
apply
its
development at 4-5 Correct pronoun usage
their
ages
. Fix the agreement mistake
Children
Child
who Add an article
A child
The child
have
a lot of free time can research all edges of our world. Change the verb form
has
For instance
, I can provide my childhood
which was very interesting because my parents gave me to the school at 6 years old. But in this
way
there is the chance that Add a comma
,way
kid
Fix the agreement mistake
kids
stars
to hang out with Correct your spelling
start
bad
group of people.
Add an article
a bad
On the other hand
, little students can be more smart
at earlier Replace the words
smarter
ages
and get ahead of their peers. In
addition
Add a comma
,addition
this
student will be younger than their classmates and this
infant can start job life earlier and can earn money at young ages
. For instance
, Bill Gates went to his one teacher at 4-5 years. However
, it is extremely difficult to study at early ages
for children
, at this
years
babies brain is not enough developed.
In conclusion, I believe that every Change to a genitive case
year's
children
should have Change to a singular noun
child
own
interesting Correct pronoun usage
their own
his own
her own
childhood
. In this
way
kid’s imagination and creativity skills will be greater.Add a comma
,way
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