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The cultural influence of the song into the linguistic development.

The main aim of
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Nagashybay Ulzhay’s project
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 is to study
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 of linguistic-ancient worlds, including ancient words in the text of Kazakh traditional and folk
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 and their cognitive meaning.
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 consists of introductory, main and final sections. In the introductory part, the purpose, objectives of the research
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 and the relevance of the
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 are outlined. In the main part of the study, the sphere of use of ancient words defined from the texts of Kazakh traditional and folk
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 as well as thematic and content features
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 discussed. At the same time, it can be seen the student's closeness to creativity and the art of singing caused to come to
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 it was a little difficult. The student was able to study the etymology of ancient words, which are reflected in traditional
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 and folk
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 written on any subject. To do
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, she gave examples and arguments from various
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 and conducted a comprehensive analysis. In the final part, the project will tell you about the high performance of Kazakh Song Art in general, its educational significance for the audience, and show the contribution of
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 genre to the literature and culture of the nation. It is recommended to include
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