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It is better have friends who are intelligent than to have friends who have a good sense of humor.

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Friends
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 are indispensable in our daily life, it is generally believed that a person should social with intelligent
people
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instead
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 of
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people
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. And opposite side claims that
humour
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people
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 are more beneficial for a person's development.
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, in the following essay, I will publish my opinion and elaborate on it. On one hand, it's undoubted that funny
friends
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 could help us release pressure and be happier. Today's society increasingly development and competition occur anywhere. Naturally, there is a large number of
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 who have depression in their work or study, even it exits part
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 suffer from depression.
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, if these individuals stay with
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people
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 maybe they will feel relax and find a correct direction to emission negative emotion.
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, every coin has two sides, wise
people
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 could benefit us in other aspects. It's simple to communicate with
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people
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,because when we talking about certain things we do have not to explain these things and principles. We can deal with some problems effectively. They solve problems via unexpected methods, we never realize
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 thing could be thought at
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 way. From my perspective, what types of
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 should be socialized is depend on the individual, some individuals will tend to introvert,
humour
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people
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 are better for them. And if you want to enhance your ability, you could make intelligent
friends
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. Of course, we could stay with both and study their own advantages.

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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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