Some people think that because children find subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult, they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

The vast majority of

people

are convinced that school

subjects

such

as

math

and

philosophy

are

though

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and suppose that these

subjects

are should not be mandatory, whereas students must be able to choose discipline by themselves.

This

essay disagrees with

such

a viewpoint and

firstly

, it will discuss reasons why

such

subjects

are important for students.

Secondly

, the possible outcomes without basic

knowledge

of

math

and

philosophy

will be discussed.

First

and foremost, it is evident that modern

people

cannot live without the basic

knowledge

of

math

owing that society faced with mathematics in everyday living. Individuals should be able to divide, multiply,

to

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add and

to

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subtract, all of these types

impossible

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are impossible

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without primary

knowledge

which

usually

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is usually

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given at the school. To exemplify,

math

is essential for any curriculum at its academic level, so if the

people

do not have the fundamental

knowledge

, it would be impossible to join

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the next

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level of

studying

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.

Secondly

, the ignoring of given

subjects

could have harmful consequences due to lack of required skills for living and poorly educated

people

. Undoubtedly, that science as

math

develop

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analytical and problem-solving skills, while

philosophy

gives pupils basic

knowledge

of

world

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and highly important thoughts about life. These disciplines help in fostering rational thinking, assisting in mental development and inculcate empathy. To conclude, it is evident that schools should pay a particular emphasis to disciplines

such

as

math

and

philosophy

because these

subjects

are significant for living and without

them

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,them

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society could have

unpredictable

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an unpredictable

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outcome

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. I

am firmly believe

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, that schools should

fostering

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foster

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the following

subjects

and do not allow make

it

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them

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optional.