Nowadays businesses face problems with new employees who just finished their education and lack some interpersonal skills such as the ability to work in a team. What do you think is the main cause of the problem? How can it be resolved?

Recently, employers have been complaining about the

ameuterish

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amateurish

conduct of young workers and the fact that they lack social

skills

.

This

essay will examine the main causes of being incompetent at teamwork and

finally

suggest possible solutions to

this

problem. The main cause of

this

incompetence is the dependence on technology. There is no doubt that we live in a

technology driven

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world and most of the

time

we are engrossed in these modern devices, which leads to inadequate communication with others.

For instance

, nowadays, most students spend their leisure

time

playing video games rather than engaging in volunteering works, resulting in poorer social

skills

.

Moreover

, technology is responsible for the ubiquity of online classes which in turn reduces student-student and teacher-student interactions.

Therefore

, the more we rely on the Internet, the lesser interpersonal

skills

we develop. Reducing screen-

time

and making volunteering services compulsory for young adults

are

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critical to mitigating

this

problem. People should realise that

instead

of spending

time

with virtual friends, they should get involved in community services to enhance their social

skills

. Even the government can restrict playing computer games while making welfare works mandatory for students.

For example

, in South Korea, the government banned the playing of video games after midnight and simultaneously mandated

the

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participation in welfare works

for

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at least once a week.

Thus

in order to improve communication

skills

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one must spend sufficient

time

with others. To conclude, the reliance on machinery is responsible for the inability of new employees to work in teams.

However

, we can significantly lessen

this

by minimising the

time

spent on computers.