Nowadays businesses face problems with new employees who just finished their education and lack some interpersonal skills such as the ability to work in a team. What do you think is the main cause of the problem? How can it be resolved?

Recently, employers have been complaining about the

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conduct of young workers and the fact that they lack social

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essay will examine the main causes of being incompetent at teamwork and

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suggest possible solutions to

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problem. The main cause of

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incompetence is the dependence on technology. There is no doubt that we live in a

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world and most of the

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we are engrossed in these modern devices, which leads to inadequate communication with others.

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, nowadays, most students spend their leisure

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playing video games rather than engaging in volunteering works, resulting in poorer social

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, technology is responsible for the ubiquity of online classes which in turn reduces student-student and teacher-student interactions.

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, the more we rely on the Internet, the lesser interpersonal

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we develop. Reducing screen-

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and making volunteering services compulsory for young adults

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critical to mitigating

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problem. People should realise that

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of spending

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with virtual friends, they should get involved in community services to enhance their social

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. Even the government can restrict playing computer games while making welfare works mandatory for students.

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, in South Korea, the government banned the playing of video games after midnight and simultaneously mandated

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participation in welfare works

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at least once a week.

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in order to improve communication

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skills

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one must spend sufficient

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with others. To conclude, the reliance on machinery is responsible for the inability of new employees to work in teams.

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, we can significantly lessen

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by minimising the

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spent on computers.