Some people believe that technology has made people more sociable, and others think that it has made us less sociable.Discuss both views.
It is often discussed about the role of technology in people's sociability skills, whether it was a positive or a negative influence. The paragraphs below will outline both points of view, showing that it was advantageous for making friends from different nations and for being a safe place, but disadvantageous because of the hours consumed by the users and the diseases caused that lead to isolation.
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, smartphones and computers addiction and the self-esteem issue have made people less sociable.Linking Words
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