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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

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Parents tend to give the children better resources as compared to their own childhood.
This
 way they
also
 feel compensated in the process while bringing up their own
child
. While having a huge collection of
toys
 to play with is not all that bad, at the same time can lead to some issues.
Firstly
, having
a
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diversity in the range of
toys
 have multiple benefits. The
child
 can learn how to manage or organize better. Varied exposure to different themes of
toys
 makes one more aware.
Secondly
, sharing can
also
 develop social skills among the
child
’s friend circle. To get
hands-on-experience
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 with
toys
such
 as Rubix’s cube, puzzles hone
mental
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 capacity of the kid.
Similarly
, educational and infotainment
toys
 help shape likes and
dislikes
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, opinions, communication skills.
Thus
, caters to holistic development which is often a cause of worry for parents.
On the other hand
, if the
child
 is given more and more,
this
 may result in losing the value of
individual
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toy
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. Not only is
this
 expenditure wasteful but
also
 teaching consumerist tendencies to the
child
. Perhaps unconsciously the
child
 stops valuing his
toys
 and takes them for granted in desire for more. To have enough needs to be inculcated rather than frivolous costs being incurred. The parents need to be
also
 mindful of teaching holistic habits like outdoor games, reading, painting apart from playing with
toys
 for
all round
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 development. Having many
toys
 is
also
 burdensome when it comes to maintenance. If that could be sorted
then
 it’s much easier to assemble and play
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 per the
child
’s convenience. Gifting once in a while is a good option to keep the spirits of the
child
 happy.
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