The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The problem of ecology is very important because recently its quality has been deteriorating, which means that all progressive humankind is in great danger. Some people believe that raising
fuel
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prices
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might be the best solution to environmental problems. While
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may be possible, I personally do not agree.
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,
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is used not only for vehicles
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but
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in industry. It should be noted that
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prices
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would not solve the problem of the use of petroleum products.
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, in industry, petroleum products are used to produce plastic products and rubber bands. In any case, for one reason or another, raising
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will still not solve the problem of carbon dioxide emissions into the atmosphere.
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, higher
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prices
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can lead to inflation. The higher the price of
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, the more inevitable a price freeze is.
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, curbing
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costs oil producers hundreds of billions.
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, national economies may suffer considerably.
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in turn is not good for countries. In conclusion, I think that raising the price of
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will not help avoid the huge consequences of the greenhouse effect. In place of
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, I propose the idea of using filters for industry and for the vehicle.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • renewable sources
  • solar energy
  • equity in environmental policies
  • exacerbating social inequalities
  • incentivizing
  • subsidies
  • strict regulations
  • industrial emissions
  • sustainable local production
  • carbon footprints
  • punitive measures
  • sustainability efforts
  • robust and lasting changes
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