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Some people think in order to continually improve the quality of education high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers.Others feel that this would result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #quality #education #school #students #teachers #loss #respect #discipline #classroom
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 system is
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 integral part for school peers and future generations in their career perspective.
However
 , there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently views that teachers should be
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 that it is not a fair notion to de-evaluate the educators.
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 various factors make a section of people advocate that teacher's performance
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 must be measured , monitored and there are many reasons to substantiate it.
First
 and foremost is facilitator's
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knowledge
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 , smart teachers can only handle difficult subjects effectively.
Secondly
 , teachers have their favourite fellow being in the classes which are
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inconvenient
 for the rest of
students
 where they feel insecure or ignored.
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Educator
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 should be sensitive on
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Thirdly
,coaches must improve their required skills and keep
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 on the latest subject information. On the
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other hand
 , some believe that mentors should not be demotivated by backhand compliments by his or her own class followers for
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 reasons.Chiefly , it would degrade the face value of the mentor.
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 , it creates
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 study atmosphere.
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 , it leads to difficulty in maintaining
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realtionship
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relationship
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 and the
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God in our culture since ancient
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.In due respect to our school
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dignified
 persona our coaches , its not
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 to allow
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