Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? What other measures do you think might be effective?

At the present time,

people

mobility have grown rapidly causing

traffic

jam and

air

pollution. Since that, the optimum

way

to solve these problems is to raise the

petrol

fee.

This

essay will discuss my opinion regarding increase the

price

of gasoline and another

way

that might be useful to solve these problems. I do agree that many countries have taken steps to increase the

price

of

petrol

to solve these problems,

moreover

, some nations have discarded the cheapest option of

petrol

. In Indonesia,

for instance

, the government have removed premium type gasoline which is the lowest

price

petrol

. On the order hand, the government

also

develop their public

transportation

to encourage

people

move

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to use public

transportation

instead

of using a private vehicle. It is clear that increasing the

petrol

fee and developing

the

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public

transportation

will reduce

traffic

jam

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jams

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and

air

contamination.

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Additionally

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, raising vehicle tax will

also

suppress the growth rate of the number of vehicles.

Therefore

,

people

with medium economic conditions prefer to use public

transportation

.

For example

, in

Singapore

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the executive

apply

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applies

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high tax to the

citizen

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which

have

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a

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private

transportation

. As the result, Singapore

have

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low

traffic

congestion and have good quality

air

. To conclude, the best

way

to suppress the

grow

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growth

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of

traffic

is

increasing

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to increase

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the

price

of

the

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petrol

but

in

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the other hand, the government needs to improve their public

transportation

to support their policy. In my opinion, the other

way

to control the growing

traffic

and

air

pollution

is

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raising the private vehicle tax

therefore

,

people

tend to use public

transportation

.