you work for a large corporation. You want to apply for one month's leave owing to illness. Write to your manager requesting leave for the same. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe about your illness • inform the manager how you intend to manage your job assignment in your absence

Dear Paul, My name is Nikita; I am working with your team as an Assistant Manager. I am writing
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letter to request your valuable approval to grant me leave for one month due to illness. Let me give details about the situation.
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couple of months, I have been going through pain in my legs, when I consulted with a doctor, he confirmed that I am facing a nerve pain issue, and recommended
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take complete month
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rest with physiotherapy.
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, I have discussed and transferred my current projects to my team member Ms Seema, she said that she has ensured me that she will complete my on-going on time in my absence.
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between 10-2 PM, in case of any urgency at work. I solicit your cooperation and waiting for your revert. Yours sincerely, Nikita.
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