Some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show that we care about them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
As you know it is widely spread today that some people believe it is important to give
gifts
and presents to friends and family. They think that in such
way
they Correct article usage
a way
show
their careness
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cares
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, they may present even some very expensive presents. Correct your spelling
Moreover
For example
, a boyfriend and a girlfriend is a couple for only one
or two weeks and that boy presents his girl very expersive
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expensive
gift
such
as a gold ring, a car, a separate flat or something like that. He wants to kill two birds with one
stone - fo
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to
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girls
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know if they are comming
or going. If you make Correct your spelling
coming
such
presents and gifts
you will be foolish and someone will think that you would like to "buy" them.
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one
should value not its value but the feelings of the person who gave it , even though the gift
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is not expensive and maybe even cheap. Correct pronoun usage
apply
In addition
, when we were children every teacher in my school said that the best present is that one
that was made by our hands. And as I remember my mother was alsways
very happy when I presented her my picture with very roughly drawing, my simple poem or something like that.
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no
gift
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their interests.
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gift
but to show
how you are loving your friend or a member of your family. You may present a lot of thing
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but they might be from our hurt. It is not necessary that the item must be very expensive and fashionable. First
, not everyone loves it and even needs it. It is much more important to be able to emphasize that the person to whom the gift
is intended is dear to you and that you have the best feelings for him. Sometimes it is better to present one
flower than a lot of flowers to show
your love
and sincerely
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