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Some people believe that one-on-one lessons are better for learning while others think that group lessons are superior. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is supposed that it is more crucial for
learners
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 to study alone as it is more efficient and may help them progress faster. While other thinkers affirm that working in groups is more beneficial for pupils to sharpen various
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. In my opinion, both individual and
group
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 study is equally important and I shall put forth some ideas to exemplify my points with lucid examples in the following paragraphs. On the
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 hand, there are various boons when individuals decide to study alone by
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themselves
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. At
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,
learners
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 can become more independent when resolving a complex exercise and try their best to find solutions
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 of counting on others. In fact, as learning at home, one is prone to research a topic meticulously from various resources to identify pertinent solutions.
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, he may gain some deeper knowledge of the
lession
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lesson
 and become well prepared before classes. Eventually,
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learners
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 can develop their critical thinking
skills
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, creativity and progress faster in their learning processes.
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, individual learning may be more flexible as youngsters can decide the time and locations that are pleasant for their schedules.
On the other hand
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,
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 works have become ubiquitous as numerous educational institutions are keen on integrating the
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 learning approach in their teaching methods. Some educators believe that teamwork is an essential skill that adolescents should develop and sharpen when they are at
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. It is true that most
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educational
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the educational
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 programs often requires a number of hours for team works and
group
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 assignments as they encourage youngsters
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 more
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solitary
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 and learn to collaborate with others to solve their problems.
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, they may strengthen interpersonal and communication
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 which are inevitable for their prospective careers.
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 to
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, studying in pairs or a small
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 may encourage
learners
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 to learn from each other, understand their strengths and weaknesses and build some great rapport with other classmates. In conclusion, while I believe that individual learning is a crucial process that aids pupils understand profoundly lessons and become
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more independent
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individuals
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, working in
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group
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a group
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 is vital to amend interpersonal
skills
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 that are indispensable for their future occupations.
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